reflection on peer review

After reviewing Ellie’s paper I think the comments I made can also be applied to my own paper. Some things I suggested Ellie were to check in text citations, add more information to the results section, and try to be more concise. I can go back over my paper and make sure I cited my information correctly and didn’t make any errors. I can also go back and try to shorten sentences. After analyzing her paper I also realized I need to add more headers to my paper so it is more organized.

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