sample paper analysis

Writing in political sciences:
Strengths- 1. Used a lot of different sources 2. cited their sources correctly 3. went into depth on SLR for both academic and non academic papers
Weaknesses- 1. In conclusion they repeat themselves a lot 2. Doesn’t explain quotes 3. Only gave a few examples from the interview

Writing in Psychology:
Strengths-1. gave a clear intro 2. correctly cited sources 3. Interviewed two people
Weaknesses-1.  didn’t use headlines for structure 2. paper didn’t have much detail 3.only used three sources

Writing as a creative writer:
strengths - 1. Talks about audience, structure and language 2. Cited references correctly 3. Gavea good explanation in the intro
weaknesses - 1. Organization of paper is unclear 2. Didn’t analyze the same things for the academic and non academic papers 3. The first page is numbered 2
Writing in Economics:
Strengths- 1.explains the job of someone is economics  2. Cited sources corrected 3.organized the different topics correctly
Weaknesses- 1. Use block quotes which aren’t necessary in APA  2. Repetitive at some points 3. Used too many quotes

Role of writing in engineering:
strengths - 1. Explains the job of a engineer  2. Uses an appropriate amount of quotes 3. Takes about structure, language, and references
Weaknesses- 1. Doesn’t introduce the first quote 2. Organization is not clear (doesn’t separate academic and non-academic) 3. Don’t mention the interview much

Writing in the Business Discipline:
Strengths- 1. Explain structure, language and audience well 2. References are cited correctly 3. Had good references about the interview

Weaknesses- 1. Doesn’t introduce the first quote 2. Doesn't give good explanation of the quotes 3. Use block quotes which aren’t necessary

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